This isn’t high school. Finishing the book isn’t required. We need to capture readers’ interest in the first few pages, or we risk losing them.
After getting to know my clients and their writing style and taking their goals and concerns into consideration, here are some factors I consider when analyzing the first few pages:
- Does the story introduce an interesting character in a compelling situation? Will readers connect with them and care about them?
- Is it clear what the character wants and what’s standing in their way? What is important to them? Are there stakes, conflict, and tension?
- Is a question introduced—something the reader would be curious about and feel driven to continue reading?
- Does the story begin at the right time (generally with action of some sort underway)?
- Is exposition and backstory limited to what the reader needs to know now?
- Do the first few pages align with genre and reader expectations?
- Is the writing inviting, and does it flow well? Does it allow readers to immerse themselves in the character’s experience?
I think about these questions during my first read and after studying the full story, then provide specific, actionable recommendations for the author to consider. This gives us the opportunity to brainstorm ideas and strengthen the first few pages.
I love collaborating with clients to create a story readers can’t put down.